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This has been an rough week because many different things are happen i think this is an bad sem. for me. It like no matter how hard i try someting alway go wrong. It like i can't win for losing, i'm stating to think i have bad luck but don't know why i'm not an bad person or any thing. I just hope that when the fall sem come it get better.

This has been an rough week because many different things are happen i think this is an bad sem. for me. It like no matter how hard i try someting alway go wrong. It like i can't win for losing, i'm stating to think i have bad luck but don't know why i'm not an bad person or any thing. I just hope that when the fall sem come it get better.

where i at in my argument essay is having to chose another bill because i didn't follow the correct way so know i staring over. Which put me in find another bill which is should the U.S proved public benefits to people who was affected by 9/11 terrorist attack , and i was for it.And now i have to research this one and brain storm on it. Then put it into paragraph from.

Well today I just finished up my argument essay and I think I did fairly well on it which is good.  I've done more research on it so I can understand it better.  I think this bill is a great idea and it should be passed because it can help out alot and other states already have 16 year olds donating and nothing bad has seemed to occur from them.  If this bill gets passed I will be happy.  

In my essay I think the strongest part was my position on the bill. Although I feel that my examples were sufficient I think that maybe I should have look for different examples. Over all I am satisfies with the final draft of my essay. At first my position was in favor of the bill but as i researched and look though other opinion i realized i did not fully agree. My essay includes a personal experience and I also use Kean University and TCNJ in my essay. I found those examples good because i know people that have used the resources offered by the schools. 

Today was a great day but to bad for me i had to work all day. Now i trying my best to look over my essay before summiting it. I hate working doing the weekend because i never have time to get all my school work done, this is a perfect example of how this job is getting in the way of my school. At this point all i can do is hope that i pass all my finials coming up. however, this might be the last blog I'm getting a grade for but it wont be the last one i write....

    In my bill final draft I think it might be a little better then all my other drafts since this semester.  But I might could have did a little better working on the drafts.  Good thing writing this bill is all over.  I hope the points that I gave are understandable.  Also, I hope the reader understand where I am coming from writing in the draft.  This assignment was not to bad to do, it took almost the whole month that was good though.  In my draft I tried to give good points that students and teachers understand what I am trying to say. So, all I have to wait for are the grade for the assignment and I might will let yall know what's going on.

I just finished up my  polished draft for the argument essay, i think i did an ok job knowing that its going to be better when i do my final draft for the portfolio. Well this is probally going to be my last blog of the year and i am happy its finaly going to be over because these blogs were getting old becuase their was really nothing else to right about i was running out of ideas an getting a little bored writing them but i guess it was a good experiance.

for what i'm doing now, is writting a "polished draft"  about my argument on a bill that is suppose to help me with to develope a sense on what issues i shouold argue about and how to go about doing it . my nexty step is that io still have to do other piece of writing that i don't really know yet but i'm sure that its going to take all the time i need . then i am to continue on working on my portfolio for my class  grade. hopefully i will show that being in this class was not a waste.

My how time flies when you're having fun.  I have been working hard all semester to meet the requirements of my major, achieve my goals, and of course post these blogs.  As you may know I have been writing these blogs for my English class.  However, this week's posts may be the last posts that I create.  My how time flies, I don't think that I will cancel my account, but I may occasionally post a blog or two to promote Music Concerts and such.  My how time flies as I practice and prepare for numerous final exams, practicals (playing exams), and juries.  My how time flies for I must adjourn now.  Until we meet again...

                          Super Nerd :)